I promise I won’t complain this time.
I need your help. I’ve been reading Writer’s Digest. Through it, I learned that I should probably add a few more characters. So, I’m throwing my main character into a larger, more chaotic household. I need to choose a name for her deadbeat older brother who lives in the basement and gets a lot of grief from his parents about going to college. I have it narrowed down to three (all the names have to do with the night sky). Please help me decide by voting.
I also learned about the Nonet, which is a newer poetic form in which the first line has nine syllables, the second line has eight syllables, the third line has seven syllables, and so on. I spent my evening holed up in my room, fiddling with words to make my own Nonets. I made quite a few–some of them better than others. I will not put all of them here, though, since I may use them in my creative writing course next year.
HOME
Her home is of sticks, of stone, of bricks,
of bone, of love, of fire, of dark.
It is of pages, of words,
Of cloud, of birds. And each
Night when she closes
Her eyes on the
Cold cement,
She sees
Home.
PASSION
Passion burns inside, melting my lips.
It pumps through my heart and blood
In a beat of scarlet red.
Then it stops dead. The world
Watches in silence
And fades to black.
When he leaves
I feel
Cold.
THE BEGINNING
This is the beginning of all things.
The birth of light and life before
Darkness and death. Where He makes
The earth out of nothing
And man out of dirt.
Where He sees all
And says that
It is
Good.
Give it a go! They’re pretty fun. I usually refrain from writing poetry, but syllable-oriented poems aren’t half-bad.